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01-25-2007, 03:46 PM
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Happy Chapter 3; "Mudokon Fortress"

Few hours later, all the free Mudokons of Mudos were reunited at the Mudokon Fortress. The villagers were all waiting outside in camps. The chiefs of the villages had etablished a counsel inside;

"So, which of you just used the great horn of the reunion?" said one of them.

"That's none of us" said another. "And, where are the chiefs of the west province villages?"

"You know, they're all working in the soulstorm brewery." Said another.

"Yeah, it's true."

"It's me that just called you." Said a mysterious Mudokon staying in the sunlight.

"Who are you?" Said one of the chiefs.So, when the door closed, the identity of the Mudokon was clear. "You...you are the legendary big face?"

"Yes" in fact, that was Bob wearing the big face's mask. "The almighty raisin send me to warn you about the industrial menace."

"Which menace?" said the great priest of the monzaic lines. "I personnaly met mr. Molluck and he don't seems to have any mad plans for us."

"All they want is to make us slaves. That's the almighty raisin that said it to me personaly."

"You know what Molluck said." said another village chief. "All that the industrialists want is help us on our path to progress."

"Progress? Which progress? Our progress to the pain and the sadness?"

"Blasphemy!" said the monzaic lines great priest. "They give us jobs and offer us moolahs. We're about to become developed too."

"Is there any of you missing?" said the big face.

"Yeah, the chiefs of the west province." Said one of the chiefs of south coast villages.

"No, I mean others."

"Huh..."

"Yeah, the kings of the Necrum city aren't here too." said the priest of the Scarabania temple. " It isn't normal."

"I don't like to announce bad news but..." Big face said before taking his breathe. "...They're all dead. They've been killed by an army of sligs, send by Glukons." All the Mudokons were shocked by this news. But the great priest of the monzaic lines took back the order.

"Lies! It's all lies! The Glukons are our friends, they can't do that!."

"I hoped I didn't have to do this, but I'm obliged. Follow me."They got up the stares to go over the surveillance tower. "Watch this."

As the blue fog was clearing, one of the chiefs said; "What the..." They saw about ten factories making deep black smoke.

"You see..." said the big face. "They're cutting our trees, killing our sacred animals, draining our water and many other terrible things."

"S... so...what's your plan big face?" Said one of the chiefs.

"I don't know, I thought you could help me etablished one."

"But... our queen never allows them to do that." Said another.

"Oh my odd!" Said the monzaic lines great priest. " Our queen is in danger! If they want to slave us, that means they'll attack our queen very soon!"

"Oh no!" Said the big face. "I'll take an Elum and go to the monzaic lines fastest as I can to warn them! Etablish a plan during this time."

Bob took an Elum and started going fastest as he can to save his beloved mother.
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I'm the Save-the-none-industrialists (S.N.I.) Ceo's

Don't forget to read my fan fiction's first part; http://www.oddworldforums.net/showthread.php?t=14235

And the second part too; http://www.oddworldforums.net/showthread.php?t=14912

(Sorry for my english I'm a french-canadian)

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