[magic9mushroom]

OOC: MS, basically an RPG is where some people pretend they were characters in a story that is generally more interesting than real life. In my opinion, you should read the first couple of pages (up to the creation of Slurp 2), every character bio (yeah, I know, we should have it a bit more structured, but we'll leave that till version 2), and the whole of the last, say, 4 pages. Also, your character bio leaves a bit to be desired. You should at least explain how the mud got all his various weapons, and I would really not like to see an infinite ammo machine gun on a player character. Limited ammo is all right so long as you don't powerplay with it. Also, we unfortunately already have a scrab-paramite hybrid as Shryke, Zerox's main character. You will have to fit your character into the story somehow, I advise running into one of the characters who is by him/herself or out in the wilds or something (Gillik and Ghost, Sindera maybe, Slurp 2 and Sklitch are together, someone else might be, I've sorta lost track)

Anyway, the characters active in the last few pages are:

Slaveless:
Slurp 1: A Fleech with strange birthmarks that has had one of its brains transferred to a Sleg.
Slurp 2: A sleg, the other half of Slurp. Make sure you read the many plot points about these two, they are pretty much the central characters as far as the plot goes. Slurp is his main character.
Sindera: A female Intern who works for Gillik.
Kolca: A fleech in the colony who belongs to underground movements.

Zerox:
Shryke: A Shrykull (scrab-paramite hybrid) created by the Vykkers. Also a major character. His main character.
Sklitch: A runtish Slog who has allied himself with the native side.

E'l Scrabino:
Shredder: A scrab. His main character. Dunno what else to say.
Matt: A mudokon who is currently Sindera's assistant (hence on the industrial side) although not with her at the moment.
Jeff: A reincarnated Mudokon with psychic powers.

magic9mushroom:
Gillik: The boss of the industrial military operation, a Glukkon, although unlike most, he does nearly everything for himself. Originally my main character, although Angela is now a bit more important.
Angela: A slightly crazed Vykker who has cybernetic equipment implanted into her. The surgery removed her memory, but she has had it recently restored to her, as well as recently joining the natives. A fairly major character.

Bullet Magnet:
Ghost: unknown species, who is a long way from all the action, but who has a modified security orbthat is for all intents and puposes his body as he is so adept at controlling it.

That's about it. Slaveless is a better authority than me, though, as he's been here since page 1 and has both the most characters and the two most major ones. I'm sorta the 2IC of this RPG. (That table was as much for my benefit and E'l Scrabino's as yours, so don't feel embarrassed.)

IC(Angela): Angela sat down awkwardly on a tree stump.

"Well, Shryke, you see, I was originally a rather radical Vykker. I opposed mistreatment of animals, I wanted to help Mudokon terrorists like Abe, I was generally someone who was a big annoyance. So, of course, when they developed interface technology to allow someone to communicate with computers, and knew that the experiments were very dangerous, they naturally chose me. I ended up not dead, but my memory got wiped, and also my personality got changed into a sadistic psychically unstable bitch. When I got here, my first task was to try to control that Sleg (I don't know its name) with my implant. It worked, although I had to remove his brain to do it. I then realized just how much power I had, and took over the big cheese, Gillik, in a similar manner. But then this spirit that looked like a massive white Scrab intervened, and restored my memory, and my conscience. It also transported me here. From the fact that I can see that Sleg running around, I presume it cured him as well. I don't know what happened to Gillik. I'm back to my previous self now, and that means I'm on your side. I need you guys to trust me for me to help you defeat Gillik, Sindera and the rest of the industrials. Please?"