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My story:The playstation Diamond Sisters part1 Oddworld
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12-29-2006, 09:01 AM
Arxryl
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Pretty good! the only thing I'd change is the spelling of some words and maybe, as you said, grammar. but other than that it is a wonderful story so far!
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