Awesome chapters, Mitsur, especially the last one (had me laughing out loud - literally - in several places
). Good stuff.
You know, I've been thinking, maybe we should make a game of this?
I'm pretty good with Game Maker (though I say it myself), so if some people were interested in making sprites, some people could even just provide ideas of features and such, and of course, if anyone else on here was interested and was good with Game Maker they could help with that. And I think we could safely leave the *cough* storyline up to you.
What do you guys think?