What a fool I am. As I was reading this, I actually though, "Hey, maybe mitsur will make me conscious for an entire chapter this time and actually give my character some importance!". Damn you for being so gullible, five-minutes-ago-snuzi. Damn you.
Besides that, I really liked it
. You know, once you're done with this, you and I should collaborate along with a few other people and create another one that has to do with OWF. Each person can do a chapter. It'll be fun
P.S. Please...just
please make me conscious from now on?
I realize you're probably going to just disregard that and have me knocked out again in some unexpected manner, but it was worth a shot nonetheless.