OOC: Sorry, I will try to spellcheck things. Tell if I still need help after a few posts.
I've added a new character...I hope it was alright this way I thought I could have some more fun.
IC: Zap boarded the train from his previous factory. He darted onto the train quickly. He looked at the dotted lines and exes across his arm. He was still in shock, and surprised by the pain the vykers planned on putting him through. He remembered there laughter as he squirmed while the interns carved these marks into his skin. He knew there would be no sympathy for him anywhere he cried a little then stopped once he noticed the train was stopping. Zap slowly walked from the back of the bus to the door that he would be leaving through. He peered through the window. Noticing some people walking off. This way he might be able to run somewhere and hide without having to do labor. He walked into the station. He looked for something, somwhere, anything or anywhere to hide.
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Last edited by Taytay; 12-11-2006 at 06:36 PM..
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