OOC: OK, this is getting out of hand again. Let me point a few things out.
1. Albino Slig - Your entry seems OK, but the way Jet is trying to communicate with others is not right. They won't run to Jet just because he shouted for help. Make him go around the place, bump into someone, ask him how things are done around, etc. Be more creative.
2. Taytay - First, character profiles go into the W@RF Profile Thread, not here. Second, random characters are not prefered around here. Third, there were attempts to bring a Mudokon rescue force to RF before, and it didn't go well. I would advise you to create a normal worker Mudokon or a Slig or whatever you like. Just not a Vykker - we already have 4 of them.
3. Abe16 - No entry at all. You have to make one for your character, or we won't even know where Jam is. And, as I said, there are already more-than-enough Vykkers in the factory, though it's not really a problem, but I remember when Praetyre met the other two Vykkers.
4. Sapphire Diamond - This section is called 'Oddworld RPG', which means that the characters here are all Oddworldians. Not humans. The thread you're looking for could have been Havoc's Non-Oddworld RPG (forgot its name), if it hasn't been dead for months.
Even though, you're all welcome, just try to follow the rules. Also, read back a little, it can just improve your skills.
Just noticed that Splat sorted this out before me... Ah well, you must have got the point by now.
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