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11-30-2006, 07:02 PM
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Corporate Espionage
 
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OCC: Ok, I guess i'll get back in then. I know you guys'll probly accuse me of trying to get attention for my character, but i'm not. Ok, here we go! Leaving off from Mech's discovery in the freezer! Heres the previous part, since it's so far back:

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Mech shifted uncomfortably in the small corner of the train he had stowed away on. Coal dust and dirt flew into his eyes and mouth, making him cough and blink quickly. He hated this, but it was the only way to get into Rupture Farms without alerting the bastard who had done this to him. Mech closed his eyes and tried to sleep. But it wouldn't come. He was so worked up about this lead that he hadn't even been able to take a nap.

After what seemed a lifetime, the train finally started to slow down. It came to a screeching halt, send more dust and dirt everywhere. Mech grimanced, and pulled himself up. Looking around carefully, he made sure the way was clear. Satisfied, he jumped off the train and onto the hard yet cool concrete. He pulled a katana halfway out of it's sheath, and slowly walked to the nearest door, which was marker MEAT PROCESSING LEVEL 7. He opened the door and quickly back away, but no one jumped out. He took a tentative step into it, and, gaining confidence, strode into the abyss-like door, and a pair of auto-lights flicked on. Scrab meat hung on grisly hooks while a slight chill permeated the air. Mech could see his breath. At the end of the room, another steel door waited. Mech grabbed the handle, and heaved. The door clanged back, revealing the horrible sight within.
Still OCC: Ok, now to start the next part.

Mech reeled back from the freezer door, clutching his stomach, which was threating to forcibly and disgustingly eject it's contents. He eyes burned the sight in front of him into his brain forever. Letting out the first adult scream of terror he'd ever had, Mech slammed shut the door, and pushed his back against it, breathing heavy. He shivered invoulintarily, and dashed away from the door, and turned back toward it when he was roughly 10 feet away. The rusted-metal, frosted door glimmered innocently in the dull lamp glow only an industrial section can have.

Mech stared at it. The door continued it's illusion of innocence. Mech stared. This silent Steef vs. Innocent Door continued for many moments, until Mech finally averted his eyes. He walked away from the door, still facing it. He didn't want that thing at his back until he was a good 50 feet from it. He went into the nearest corridor, and read the sign above him:

RUPTURE FARMS STORE ROOMS

What the hell Mech thought. Anything's better than the door again.

He opened the store room door, paused, and looked at the inconspicous freezer door again.

Something behind it thudded against the door, and the light above it went out, plunging it into darkness. Metal being bent reached Mech's ears, but he was already running, halfway through store room #1.

The thing behind The Door gave an indescribable sound, and subsided.

OCC: You never will find out completly what is behind That Door- at least from my writing- but rest assured, Mech will see it again.
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