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I like the attention grabbers everywhere. they really keep someone intuned to the story. Great job!
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"Attentions Grabbers"? Do you mean it's captivating? Well thanks anyway. Chapter 4!
EDIT: What the hell? Something wierd hapened whe I posted... Anyway I'll edit in Chapter 4 later.
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How could I ever think, it's funny how, everything you swore would never change, is different now.
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