Yes. Finally done! Awesome Fan Fic... one of the best.
Man, that was a lot of reading... but if sure was worth it. Thanks, I really enjoyed that part, and looking forward to more. I love your style of writing, and all the cool ideas that you come up with. I do have to admit that it is very weird adapting to having humans on Oddworld for now, but I think the way you tell the story makes it pretty interesting.
Oh, and I have a question. How come it stitched to first person in the very last few senteces?
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