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10-02-2006, 03:10 PM
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: May 2006
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Oddworld: Stranger's Wrath Through Her Eyes

Oy! I couldn't think up a title, okay? I know I suck at this...anyways, I decided to put my Fanfiction up. Please don't hurt me. I know it's not good...
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In the distant future, Oddworld was part of Earth, all of its inhabitants living in weak peace with the humans. Creatures of the second continent of Oddworld were discriminated and pitied by the superiority of the humans, their pride clouding their judgment.

Not only was the hate of the Oddworld inhabitants growing greater at the humans, but also the humans grew too inferior among them. The only thing to uncloud their judgment of them was one word: rebellion.

The Oddworld inhabitants one day began to viciously attack the humans, beginning the reincarnation of the civil war that happened many centuries ago.

The war lasted for two hundred years, with an unsteady amount of humans remaining on Oddworld. One girl that remained was Alex, whom was traveling alone in the Oddworld desert, and brutally beaten by scouting outlaws.

Bounty heads on humans were scarce on Oddworld, the human survivors' numbers winding down to near-extinction; therefore, the price on their heads was growing larger and larger. Humans had to hide in order to survive, but something about this girl was odd, she wasn’t hiding with any humans or traveling with them.

She was no older than seventeen, five-foot-four, black hair with soft blue eyes and a scar across her cheek. She had bruises and scars all over her body, but she walked on through the Oddworld dessert. That’s where we begin the tale.

Alex groaned as she walked through the hot dessert. She stumbled forward and fell face first into the sand. “Oh, by all the…” She muttered as she stood up and spit some sand out of her mouth. “Why now?”

“Human!” A voice yelled.

“Huh? Oh, crap. Wolvarks!” Alex growled as she started to run.

“Get it!” The Wolvarks’ voices growled, “Don’t kill it, but grab it! Sekto wants them alive!”

Alex hissed, “Sekto. 'Course. Should-a known it was him.”

She ran from the Wolvarks until a bullet went through her side. She hissed in pain and fell to the ground. Alex groaned and tried to stand up, but she was weak and fell to the ground. “Oh, well, had a crappy life. If this is how it’s gonna end, then I wanna quick.” She muttered.

“Got it!” A Wolvark yelled. “What?”

Alex heard jingling behind her and the Wolvarks growled, but no shots were fired. A man’s voice growled, “Is that how ya’s treats a lady?” He asked in a thick, southern accent.

“It’s just a human!” A brave Wolvark yelled.

“She’s a lady, ya piece of filth. Go back to yer Master an’ do his biddin', but leave the human alone. She’s mine.” The male voice growled, “Or yer’ll answer to me.”

The Wolvark’s opened fire, but soon the shots were silenced. The man’s voice said smugly, “Tolds y’all. An' ya did have teh answer teh me.”

Alex groaned as she struggled to stand up. Her vision impaired, but she could hear the sound of heavy boots walking over to her. She held her side and stood up strait. “Who are ya?” She asked before swaying forward.

Two muscular arms caught her and picked her up, “Easy der, kid. I’s gotcha.”

“Let me go.” Alex struggled weakly, her strength was leaving her and quickly.

The man smiled and shook his head. “Nu-huh, kid. You’s needs teh heal.” He laughed, “Now jus' calm down. I ain’t gonna hurts ya. I promise.”

“Yeah. I’ve heard that ‘fore.” Alex muttered weakly before losing consciousness.

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There we go. short, I know, but it'll get longer...promise...*Hides behind flame shield* Don't hurt me! It's my first Oddworld Fanfiction.
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