OOC: D'oh! I left out the part of that Luhead isn't a Slig! How could I forget that! But yeah, I hadn't defined what the watch tower looks like, so yeah, you can say there's dustbins. Or did you mean E'l Scrabino's Slig?
Skillya, yeah, I agree with you. The spirit doesn't seem to be a hero like Meepiluch, just a land hog. (no offense) But, I have learned that someone being made to be a hero, is probably not going to be one. RPG characters start off with their own set of plot, but then, they grow a life of it's own. Soon, the player cannot not control the character's future. They go with the flow, almost like a real life. So you never know what will happen. For example, in The Albino Scrab, I never intended for there even to be a Slurp 2. In fact, I planned him to be an annoyance for the Mudokons traveling to the Albino Scrab spirit. But actually, he went back to the colony and discovered the Slegs that were scared by Big Red. In the end, he was the one to join the native side. With the wild. So, yeah, my character completely changed sides, from eating the Mudokons, to protecting them.
And Skillya, you might want to lessen the day limit of when your character is going to come back. Two monthes is something I doubt that we could ever get to, or by version one.
So, that's it.
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