OOC: Magic, when you made the Sligs zombies to Angela, what did you mean 'in the area'? I would be comfortable if it was in the blimp.
And remember Magic, when people were constantly telling you to edit your post? Well, I can give a reason why. Well, your characters always have some sort of power to know what everyone is doing, having diffierent kinds of machines that tell them where people are, having weapons whenever they wanted to have, and having to be able to control masses of people. That makes it unfair for others, because no one else has those powers, and they can't fight back. It's also unfair that you use your powers to always know what people are doing. That's unfair, for no one can keep a secret from you, and makes your character kind of... hated. It makes you too powerful, and everyone else, helpless. So I would suggest that to avoid making this happen, you decrease how many powers that Angela has to two. Like, she has the ability see what's happening in the blimp, but not outside. She also has the ability to broadcast Gillik's voice, inside the blimp.
And wouldn't Angela have lost her new sense if she lost control over Slurp 2? Another thing is that the way you are trying to control Sligs, is not very postive. What you are doing is to stop Sligs from doing what they are doing, and that would make the whole operation collaspe. Because you can't control what their doing, you just stop what they are doing. So I advise that you just say like, that on every Sligs' mask, that Sindera is being demoted or fired, and that no one should listen to her.
But don't think that Sindera is dead yet.
IC: Sindera twitched her arm when she heard the gunshot, and Sindera waited for her death. But after ten seconds, she slowly opened her eyes, thinking that she was in hell. But yet, when she opened her eyes, instead of seeing Vykkers and Khanzumers with horns, she saw the woods she was in. And then, she looked to around her, and saw that everything was the same. But then, she realized that the arm she twitched, had a little dart right next to it. She wasn't shot, and she wasn't dead. Her horns relaxed and she dropped her head back on the ground, and though in what she could do now.
Time went by, and then her forest silence was disrupted by the two Mudokons she had enslaved a little earlier. She opened her eyes, and looked at them both gracefully. She sighed in relief that they found her, and took a moment before she said anything. Afterwards, she rasped, "Well, let's just say that mistrusting a Slig caused me to be attacked by Paramites. And now, I ruined my shirt. But that's not important right now. A bit** named Angela, who is a Vykker computer, has decided to go into power. It has hypothesied the boss, and nearily kill me tragicly. And now, I need your help. But first, do any of you know how to use a weapon, or at least a slingshot?"
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Slurp 2 nodded his head and followed Shryke, in understandment. But when he sensed a Scrab, he growled aggressively. He regonized the Scrab from the battle they had together. But when he heard what was Shryke was saying, he was confused. Why wouldn't he try to harm him, he this was a Scrab? Slurp growled in Fleech, "Because he is a Scrab, a bloody Scrab that sees me as his lunch! He probably lives by 'I have my friends close, but my enemies are closer.' and when we are in trouble, and we need his help, gulp! He eats us all! He's a savage! I don't understand why you haven't killed him yet!"
The Fleeches were amazed at Slurp 2's speech and look at Shryke. One of them screeched, "Why did you welcome him in? This Sleg his utterly stupid. He thinks that we are all in danger. The thought even cries out, 'Loser!!'."
All the others mumbled in agreement. They sure didn't like being with someone who was psycho. They got rid of those Fleeches a long time ago, and they sure didn't need a predator who was also mental. Slurp 2 was outraged, and burst out, "You all are oblivious to the sitution! You...." (At this point, I would think Shryke and Shredder would say something)
A little before, Leo had thought that Sklitch was leading him somewhere, and started to hastily walk after him. Slurp 1 realized that this was his chance to do something. Quietly laying where he was, Slurp anticipated the rather slow moving Slig to come closer to him. These kind of battles were very important, so he had to have the surprise attack done perfectly. Once the Slig was a little more than 3 paces away, Slurp flung his tounge at the Big Bro's gun.
Being that the grip of the Slig was loose, Slurp was easily able to wrap his tounge around the gun, and pull toward his mouth. Slurp tried to hastily stretch his mouth muscles to git the rather enormous gun inside his mouth. Once the gun found it's way onto the rest of the tounge, Slurp realized how come Fleeches didn't eat this kind of stuff. The cool and smooth gun, was very well put together, and made it hard to crumble it into smaller pieces for digestion. But even so, Slurp was able for the gun to get inside his stomach, and digest it fast enough, before the Slig knew what happened.
The Slig was rather stupidfied by what just happened. His gun was just eaten by some Fleech. After a moment of trying to figure what to do, the Slig howled in aggressiveness, and flung his leg at Slurp. Slurp was not able to react as fast as he wanted to do, and flew about to the area where Sklitch was. Slurp wasn't very harmed from this, but the Slig was rampaged at him in anger, so he wasn't in a very good sitution. So he screeched at Sklitch, "Hey, will you help me defeat this guy? We can't let him get to the cave."
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