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07-27-2006, 07:18 PM
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Chapter 5; ''The Molluck's deal''

That's in the nature of the Mudokons to make a good welcome to all the strangers. And that's exactly why they've decided to transport they're guest, Molluck, in a trolley to they're final destination; the official nursery of the Mudokon nation, and also an holy temple; the Monsaic lines.

''When did we'll arrive to those Monsaic lines?'' Molluck said to his host the leader of the Mudos's west coast Mudokon's village.

''Yeah, we're approaching don't worry Mr. Molluck.'' Said the Mudokon leader.''Look! We can see them!''

Then all could see the big temple with two Mudokon statues at the two sides of the path who lead to the two massive gates. Few minutes later Molluck as been lead to the throne's room. There was six Mudokons with big paints symbols on theirs skin and big clothes with big feathers. They were all sit on big rocks in lotus position, they were meditate. And finally, the Mudokon queen; Sam. She was just like all the other Mudokons except his bigger ''tail'' on his head, she was also taller and his kin was blue like the sea of the Carribbean(sob). She was sit with his big abdomen where all the Mudokon eggs get out on a wheel with little baskets and the weight of the eggs make turn the wheel where Mudokons take the eggs when they arrived down and bring them to the nursery.

''Welcome my dear children, who is this stranger that you've guide to my noble throne room?'' Said Sam with a maternal, warm and soft voice(sob bis).

''My name is Molluck the Glukkon your majesty.''

''Please, just call me Sam.''

''Ok mrs. Sam, I got a deal for you.''

''A...deal?''

''He means he wanna make some negociations Mom.'' Said the Mudokon right at his left.

''Thanks my dear child. So, mister Molluck you want some negociations?.''

''Yes, business negociations.''

''Business?''

''This time I don't know what it mean.'' The same Mudokon said.

''It mean commercial exchanges.''

''Commercial?''

''Okay that's enough!'' Shout Molluck. ''Commercial, mean that I wanna build a factory on your territory.''

''Factory?''

''AAAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!'' Scream Molluck with despair. ''All I need is your permission to build my factory! Just say ok and we're in business.''

''O...ok.''

''Perfect! Excellent! I'll take this as a yes. Now you can bring me back to my Blimp.''

''Blimp?'' The village's leader said.

''(deep sigh) My flying machine on the beach.''

''Ah! ok.''

''Goodbye mister Molluck!'' Sam said.

''Goodbye mrs. Sam.'' He said before Mudokons bring them out of the throne's room.

Bob was there all the time behind the door listening all they're conversation. At this moment, he murmured very quietly;

''Oh no. It's too late.''

***

Few hours later, Molluck was back at the beach.

''Thank you brave Mudokons. Don't worry, I'll come back soon.'' Said Molluck.
''Goodbye!'' He said just before he enter in his Blimp.

When the Blimp add finally leave the ground, Molluck add immediately fone to a Slig who was somewhere in the continent of Glukose.

''Mister Molluck? What's up with you?''

''We can start the ''brew'' project.''
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