Ah, this story didn't turn out as I thought it would. Great job. I see you have made some sort of religoes-cross scienctific explamation of Oddworld's community. Haven't seen those in a while.
But I have one thing to say. There isn't a queen for every speices, so just a heads up. And I thought not every speices had believed in the same gods. No offense actually, but since this a fan fic, what you say is law in your fan fic.
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