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07-25-2006, 09:09 AM
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I thought it was a good story, so don't stop there. You did
say the cell was a female in the beginning, but then you said it was a male.
Which is it?

No offense, but I also sighted some mistakes, but you can
edit them if you want.

Good job for starters, Fred.
Don't you know that a cell is alway a female!
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And the second part too; http://www.oddworldforums.net/showthread.php?t=14912

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