Oh 
wow! This is fantastic! It's absolutely brilliant and such a good idea! Both chapters are great and I'm really enjoying it. 
 
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					 Just a question... what is correct? (Example):
 "Who are you?", the scared stranger asked hastily.
 Or:
 "Who are you?", the scared stranger hastily asked.
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 Either one works. 
