OOC: OK, I guess it's time to finish this version of W@RF. I'll just send my characters to R+R (Slaveless, can we presume Kix followed them? Or they followed Kix or whatever...), and then I'll create v.6.
The link to Splat's map will be available at the new thread. It helps alot, we can add more detail to the 'walked here from there' stuff. (Though there are a few strange things, like the Executive R+R... But that's nobody's fault, earlier, the Ex. R+R was a separate room, and now it's opening from the Executive Office's entry hall. At least, that's how I imagined it... Oh, and the workshop doesn't have a door yet...) I think W@RF could be a bit better organized, but I'll make my points in the next thread.
Welcome to W@RF, Soul-Storm. Point for good grammar, but a bit more detail to the profile would be good.
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#7 Slig and Rick walked out of the room. Rick yawned. "What a day... We haven't been working this much since this place reopened."
"Right. I will not mind if don't see another screwdriver or grinder part for a week." said #7 Slig.
Rick laughed. "Yeah. Repairs take a lot out of slacking workers like us."
They arrived to the R+R. They both went to their beds. "Night." They said and were fast asleep.
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