Quite... And i agree (i seem to do alot of agreeing these days) with bullet magnet about the punctuation and paragraphing issues... And yes, Mudoko_Jedi, we did see the 2 vykers die, but what if the explosion blew them into a teleporter? Indeed
. Plot= good: storyline=good: puntuation= needs work: fullstops and comas= needs work: and paragraphing equals needs work but other than that it is really good
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