(Ooc: Heh. My last post said I wasn't feeling 100%, and that was over 20 posts and two weeks ago. I'll bet you thought I'd kicked the bucket!
Or not, heh.
Bullet Magnet - it does look like good RPing, but there are a few things. First, I'm reasonably sure that most people who post for the first time here are critisized for having randoms in their posts - in this case, the sligs, scrubs and floorwaxer (Blue mudokon floorwaxer, hey?). Matter of fact, the entire post, while very well writen, seems to me to be out of context. Have you read the rules?
Heh. We've concocted a bit of a situation here, dripik. First order of business, to sort it out...)
When the doors opened, Duagen crept out of the elevator and hid behind the production conveyors. The sound of whirring echoed through the room, and peeking above the conveyor revealed a slig walking towards him. Still crouched, he scampered over to the wall opposite of the elevator and hid in the shadows in the corner. Luckily, the doors around here were not patient and closed before the slig could see them ajar.
He watched #7 Slig get into the elevator and go down.
"That, " he thought, "was very lucky timing. If I had been in the elevator a little later, that slig would have seen me when the door opened. I have to be careful." He decided to avoid the elevators then, and instead went into the corridors to find a safer place.
Nails walked up to Otto. "Uh, Boss? Anything else you want me to do? Things to fix? Places to guard? Cause, I heard that this place was back in business, and thought you could use another slig."
Having had a good sniff around in the caffeteria, and giving it a thorough "cleaning", Armpit went out into the corridors. He eventualy was halted by something interesting, in this case Kix and Dionysia. He walked up to Kix in the vague hopes of something being fed to him, but a scratch would be good too, he felt.
(Ooc: I ought to be getting the hang of this again sooner or later.)
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