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06-12-2006, 11:27 PM
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Drunk Elum Ranch

This is my new fanfic i like feedback so plz say stuff.

It was a blazing hot day the sun glared down on the dark metal floor baking the old elum blood. Sligs grumbled angraly amoungst each other about the Glukons, "stupid Gluks sittin in der fancy little offices eatin elum pie and munchin scrab legs", "yeah i heard theys have been gettin meech munchies some cloning viker fing some stupid arse vyker made", the two sligs conversed together grumpily.

Back in the feeding area scrubs oozed sickly thick honey with dead bees and clumps of mud into feeding trouphs. One scrub walked over to a thick rope and yanked it a couple of times and then a loud ring broke out, DING!DING!DIND!
elums came running from a large opening in the wall which led to the pen where the elums were kept across from the death pen where the elums ready for processing and occasionly a wild meep or even a sleg were kept. The elums lapt up the honey and fighting over feeding space.

There was a lack of technology at the elum ranch due to the fact that not much tech stuff had been introduced to western mudos. so to keep fuzzles getting in they ran a line of barb wire across the perimiter of the ranch. The ranch was gaurded by sligs,wolvarks and hired outlaws.
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