My English teacher always said, "Never try to pretend that your report is a conversation." Therefore I advise you to take out the "Now I will tell you about" part. Otherwise, the report is great. It just needs a little polish and a dictionary.
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My Abe's Oddysee walkthrough
"Did you know I have a dart board with certain peoples pictures on it from OWF? I show my love for them in a special way." -ILoveHammy
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