OOC: I never really wanted to focus around the village. It didn't seem like Slurp is very friendly to Mudokons, so why should he have to deal with them? My focus is the Industerials, since they are sort of part of the plot. To attack them is important too.
Oh and E'l Scrabino, the cave Shredder went into, do you know if that the Fleech mine I was in a little earlier ago, or was it just a random cave?
And, I don't think you are controlling too much characters. If you were controlling every Slig in the forest, that may be questionable. I just have a thought. Why would the Slegs care about the Sligs? How would they know if they are evil? Sligs aren't truely evil, they are just going through a rough time. Also, it's Skillya who is evil, not her children.
IC: When Slurp 1 saw the Sligs, he didn't care about the Slegs or even if he could've been shot. His focus was that the Sligs were most likely going back to their base. That was his mission. He screeched louder than before, "Buddy, go after those walk men, NOW!" Slurp 1 knew that if he were to leap out of Shryke's hands, he knew that would be bad, since Shryke is the faster one.
Slurp 2 grew tried after a while, for he couldn't tell where his pack when now. They could have already killed by now. But there was hope. Yet he lost that a while ago. The forest was full of creatures and he couldn't tell which was his own selves. Just then, a pair of Paramites flung themselves down from a tree. And they didn't seem too happy to see him.
Slurp 2 knew there was no time for this and barked, "Get out of my way! I have more important things to worry about." Remarkbly, the Paramites talked back, and oddly came to his understanding. "More important thing?! Like killing more of this forest!" the first screeched.
"You killed our brothers and cousins! They meant a lot to us!", the other screeched.
"Now it's time to see if you can die with them!", the first said again. The two started to walk towards Slurp 2. Yet he was confident that they were going to join their family.
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