thread: Writers Unite! (Story Writing Tips)
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06-07-2006, 02:27 AM
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I'm writing a story, and I really need feedback. I can't find anyone to read it and I need to be told if I'm on the right track. This is the first chapter:

http://www.oddworldforums.net/showthread.php?t=13690
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