Hi,
This looks like a realy kewl movie you're working at there.
I have made 2 films, and I am an *
award Winning* film director (Nothing wrong with a bit of bragging, as long as it's not big headednes) you can view one of my films at:
http://www.gov.im/artscouncil/movies/thetoffees.mpg
I would recommend you stop putting the script online. You want to keep your audience in as much anticipation as possible. Remember, the more they know, the less likely they will want to see it.
I love filmmaking and I am working on a massive project at the moment *coughstarwarsprequilcough* And I would be glad to help in the directual, or writing side of it. If you would like any of my help just say.
I would be thrilled to help

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