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I like it! Grammar isn't perfect but still ok, great story, I'm wanting more!
Very gripping. Also must congratulate you on the title, tis very intriguing.
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Couldn't think of a good title so I may change it when I think up a good one. (Which may never happen
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I'm very busy right now (It's the end of the school year what do you expect?) so I don't have a whole lot of time to work on chapters but I will hopfully have more time once summer vaction starts!