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WOW that's a cool & cute demon girl ya got there Maiden  jus' one critique - can ya draw the lines more so they'll become more visible, please? Otherwise it looks good  
~DS~
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Yeah, will do when I complete the picture

This was just a unready sketch. And my scanner also did scan it a bit too light-colored.
But you're right, it wasn't visible enough. I'll do better for the future.
I have a little problem. Jennadelle has not a rag to put on yet. And I don't know what clother I should give her.
So, I made some examples

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The first picture is a simply bad-ass outfit with some brass knuckles

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http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695
The second is a cowboy style:
http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695
The third one too.
http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695
And
this guys, is an
outlaw-style (Muahahaha

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http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695
I know, this outfit never match for a bounty hunter... but I couldn't stand to try it out

It's my favorite picture!
Well, the last picture is another western outfit, I think:
http://www.oddworldforums.net/attach...1&d=1146688695
Maybe you can help me with some good tips

I always can make some more examples, to dress Jenna good enough

I enjoyed, so don't worry.