Lol yea... You just summarized almost the whole story... :-/ And the thing that he spends month on finding the raisin and it's all wasted, means kind of wasted reading-time... So try to make it all have a meaning in the story or else.,... dunno... IT's gonna feel a bit meh-meh...
But i like the sound of the plot though..
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Wil siger (17:13):
Hey, I have massive nuts. :@
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