Okay , there is one main thing here that needs to be taken care off and thats
GRAMMAR . This story is very hard to follow ,the sentence " what now " scrourge asked rebel " We find a way to survive without anyone knowing were steefs"rebel said.
Try write like this : " What now? " Scrourge asked rebel . " We have to find a way to survive without anyone knowing we are steefs ! " . Rebel said .
Thats easier to read . Also , fix up on your spelling ( whats a throte? )
Just some friendly advice
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