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04-19-2006, 09:54 AM
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Marco the Glukkon
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: Apr 2006
: Grinder Farms, Mudos
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PART 2 GUYS! lol It's a rough draft.

Cut to underwater. The ocean is calm. MUNCH comes smashing into the water from a cannon ball. The baby gabbits laugh and meet up with him. He begins to swim around, with the baby Gabbits swimming around him. They twirl around in acrobatic formations and swim in the pool around Munch. Munch waves bye to them, as the babies wave back to him, and he swims to the surface. He looks up and sees ABE standing there.

MUNCH
Hey Abe! What's up?

ABE
Nothing much.

Abe kneels next to the wade pool, which is splashing around with baby gabbit tails.

ABE
So, uh, how are the babies doing?

MUNCH
Fine, except one of them tried to bite my flipper. I guess he was hungry.

ABE
(Winces) Ouch....

Munch jumps back onto the small shore surrounding the tidepool. Munch looks around in confusion.

MUNCH
Uh...where's Alf and George?

ABE
I dunno. They were here a minute ago.

Suddenly, they hear a scream from behind. ALF is trying to ride a bucking Elum, but it keeps thrashing him around. The Elum throws Alf off, causing him to land on his butt. GEORGE follows after.

ALF
Ouch!

GEORGE
Alf! You...alright?

ALF
Yeah I'm fine..jeesh that's an elusive little creature!

Abe and Munch walk up to Alf and George.

ALF
Hey Abe! Hey Munch!

ABE
Hey guys! Any news from Big Face?

ALF
Yeah, he wants to talk to you guys about sometin'. I dunno, he wants us to go too. He seemed urgent about it.

ABE
Uh...why were you riding an Elum then?

ALF
Don't pressure me alright. (folds his arms) I think I just broke my butt though.

Abe looks at Munch.

ABE
Well, might as well find out what's going on.

As they are about to leave, two Mudokons come up to Abe and Munch holding an Elum harness with an Elum attached to it.

MUDOKON 1
Hey Abe, we need your help.

MUDOKON2
Yeah, do you think you could...you know...show us how to ride an Elum? I heard you did when you went to the Scrab Nests!

ABE
Well, uh...I could...um...

ALF
(sarcastically) Yeah, ABE! Let's see how you do it.

Abe looks at the Elum and gulps nervously.

ABE
Ok....here goes.

Abe gets on the Elum. It roars and bucks Abe all over the screen with Abe freaking out. He goes offscreen, and Munch, George, Alf, and the two Mudokons wince as they hear a loud THUMP! The Elum trots away.

ALF
Woah....that's gotta hurt.

Abe is seen on the ground in a slump.

ABE
Ugghhh.........
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