[Marco the Glukkon]

Hey guys! I have probably told some of you about working on a fanfilm about Oddworld. Well, here is a sample exerpt of the first opening of the movie. I just want to see what you guys think so far if it looks good or not.

NOTE: Not that I think anyone in the forums would be evil enough to do this, but please noone take my idea. This is a help piece to see if people can follow it or not.



A large, vertical factory. A small Chant Suppressor buzzes past it, occassionally looking around. It turns left, then right, then keeps going offscreen. Fades to interior, when a Slig name ZEEK appears. Zeek is colored black with red eyes and spikes on his back and is bigger than other Sligs. He wears a badge. He walks into a large room, filled with a desk, a few windows with closed blinds over them, and the room only has one light on as the camera shifts over to 2 Glukkons talking angrily. TEX speaks up, wearing a bright and shiny green suit with large glasses.

TEX
Well, it's your fault that production has been going down lately!

JACCUZA
What? Me!? You're the one who didn't warn me of any danger!

TEX
Yeah, but you were suppossed to keep watch, Mr. Security! Now we don't have any Mudokon workers! We'll go outta business because of you!

Zeek shakes his head.

ZEEK
Oh brother....here we go.

TEX
Look at these charts!

A screen behind him shows some charts electronically.

TEX
Charts don't lie Jaccuza!

JACCUZA
Charts Charts! That's all you talk about it charts!

TEX
Well it's not my fault you're lowsy at your job!

JACCUZA
Lowsy?? Now you listen here...!

Zeek interupts.

ZEEK
Sorry to interupt your spat, but I've cleared the parimeter sir.

TEX
Don't worry about it General Zeek, Jaccuza was just leaving.

Jaccuza stares angrily at Tex.

JACCUZA
Remember to call me, when you have another failure.

Jaccuza begins to walk away, then glares at Zeek.

ZEEK
Yeah, keep walking you nimrod!

JACCUZA
Humph! I'll see to it you're out of here too, you little Slurg!

Jaccuza walks away angrily, when the door slams shut. Tex sighs and sits in a slump.

TEX
What a waste. The economy's going down and no one's here to help.

ZEEK
I am boss, you can always count on me and my squad.

TEX
I know, I know, but it all seems lost sometimes. I don't know what to do.

ZEEK
Yeah, well, what I also came to tell you was that there is a meeting going on in the lunch room. I didn't want to say anything with numb nuts standing there.

TEX
Oh don't worry about him. I'm sure some way he'll find out there's a meetin'. I guess I better get down there. I'd ask ya to go, but Gluk's only.

ZEEK
No problem boss.

Tex begins to walk away. He reaches the door then turns to Zeek.

TEX
Zeek, I hope you know you've been like a son to me. You're the only one sane around here that wants to help.

ZEEK
Thank you sir.

Tex closes the door with Zeek looking after it.

ZEEK
How could one Mudokon and one Gabbit save all those scrubs?