Heh, pretty good. Turning the whole 'Alf's Rehab & Tea' section of Oddworld.com into a fanfic is quite an original idea. You write well, and the fic was quite amusing. I think i'll try and read your other (proper) fic now.
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Fuzzle Guy: Apart from going swimming I've never been more wet in my life than when I went to see Take That.
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