The reason it's taken me this long to respond is because this seems more like a "free for all, tear it apart" session, and I didn't know how to respond. I don't want to sound ungreatful, but maybe if you gave tips on how to change something in your critique, it'd seem more welcoming.
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Why doesn't the female bug have as cool fingers as the male bug?
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Kyara's a different species than Altus.
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And how does the male work with those? They're not very nimble, I assume.
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I'm sure he manages just fine. He's quite nimble.
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...I must say, the boobs and lips on those insects are... scary, at least.
Um. Boobiness... how.. lactating indeed.
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I'm really tired of people bringing up the fact that they have breasts. It's not you I'm annoyed with, it's these tightwad elitist bastiches at the Penny Arcade forums (why, oh WHY did I sign up there?). But I told them the same thing: The breasts are part of the design, and I'm not changing it. Who's to say it couldn't happen? The biologocal laws of Earth don't exactly apply on Oddworld either.
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What do they do with the fangy paddles on their hands?
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What, you mean the claws on Altus' fingers? He uses them to climb walls.
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Hmm, how does Mr. Lockjaw balance himself?
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Bad planning on my part. I meant to make the claws level to the ground.
Kyara's new face. I made her a bit nerdy, since she's an ArchaeoPaleontologist and all.
A self-described "Futurama-esque" advertisement I did for Kyara's glasses just for kicks.