I agree with Alector - Lobo, yer a person with great abilities to become an super authoress
and this story is a good evidence of that
I loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to more.
Oh btw I'll be updating me story this week - haven't done it for a couple of weeks now
and I'm working with the pics as well. I ain't got so much stuff to do now so I hope I can finish 'em
~DS~