Pretty good start used. Where exactly is Nolybab in Oddworld? I've heard you mention it before I think, maybe in your quiz, but where is it? Good chapter, interesting, a good scene-setter, and different. An Oddworld version of the Scarlet Pimpernel, seems promising.
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