Sorry for not posting a new chapter, i didnt have the time to write a whole chapter.
Chapter 14
That was a horrible experience. Im still shaking from it now. Door number 3, i wonder what could be in there.....
..... i wished i never asked. There was a gigantic pit, but a thin tightrope to walk across. "WTF?" I thought. Then i realised the awful truth. I had to walk across it. I saw a paramite run past me, slip, and fall down the pit. 30 seconds later, there was a massive bone smashing, gut splatting sound. I shuddered. And the ghost trap and door was at the end. I gulped, and streched out my arms, and started walking across the tiprerope. "Whoa...whoa...WHOA!" I screamed as i nearly fell off. I could just see a tiny blimp of splattered paramite. I fell of, but grabbed onto the rope! "AGHGHGHGHGHGHGGHGHGGHGHGH!" I screamed! Fear and terror shot through me. Then i saw a bird who flew past me and said "ZOMG BIBI!" (Sorry, i just needed to inclued that.

) I dangled for me life, and then that huge paramite appered again! "F***!" I screamed. This door is going to take a lot longer.
End of chapter 14.