ooc: Welcome Slig_cake. A couple of pointers. Random characters are ok for your intro but don't overdo it later on. Your two sligs can't just have appeared in Rupture Farms, they must have entered at some point, say they came in with the scrab and were the only two of the slig pack to survive or something.
Most importantly, try to avoid God-Modding (making a character that can do anything to anyobody, such as random destruction being totaly indestructible or hurting/killing another person's character without their player's permission) and siezing control of the RPG. It's pretty irritating for just about everyone when a new player joins and immediately starts trying to control all the events. Do it slowly and subtley!
Goresplatter, not bad but it has some faults. There's only one rec room for all the mudokons and sligs together. There is a seperate one for glukkons. Rupture Farms has always had several floors, lifts stairs and lots of problems when they break. You've missed some things off from recent chapters like the armoury, kitchen and security office and some older locations like conference room, production lines and storehouses. I made a map as well but as I finished at almost 11:00 last night I haven't had a chance to post it. Please stand by.