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Watch this space, huh? In a few years wired and mystery dream person could be in the running for "Oddworld Forums Best Couple"?
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Not just best couple on OWF if I play my cards right.
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The Chameleon was great. Haiku's are brilliant, getting so much said in three lines! Really feeling for you already dude!
As for the second one, it was very good as a whole. A couple of things could do with a look-over, some of the rhymes seemed a bit desperate, like you were trying to hard to get it to rhyme.
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Concerning the compliments towards Chameleon...
I thank you
Concerning the criticism over my rhyming scheme in Watching...
F*ck You
Nah...just kidding. Really.
I do find myself wishing sometimes there were a couple things I would've fixed before I just unleashed my poem. I think maybe I should've revised before I posted. See, I've had Watching written for a while.
Of course, where you see trying too hard...I see those first thoughts of love towards someone. It only took a couple of minutes for me to write Watching because everything in there just flowed from my heart. I guess that's why I neglected to revise it. That would've stolen away what made it so special to me in the first place.
Now I know I said I'd be posting my next two poems soon
they seem finshed, but I feel they aren't complete. I'm just waiting for the moment of inspiration to hit me so I can finish. I only write when I'm inspired.