That one was a bit confusing....
You know, Dripik, you don't have to cover absolutely everything in the RPG. It's a great comic, but with every line put in it'll just take ages. Like that last piece, nothing wrong with it but it wasn't really necessary to see two sligs say a line each.
It's ok to skip some bits, especially if a scene is drawing out too long.
EDIT: Oh, and Slaveless, it'd be great to see some of your work
, all part of the joy!