I'm not yet accomplished with reading your whole story...
Just dont' think I don't read it, 'cause I don't write some comments.
But now I'm on page 2. (The comments for that: WOW!!! NICE!! COOL!!! LOVE THE CHARACTER OF STRANGER AND UMI!!!
Very great Story!) Anyway, it will takes a long time till page 33, because my English isn't perfect.
I'm ashamed.
Oh, well... I will write some comment again, if I'm accomplished with reading, okay?