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02-25-2006, 08:47 AM
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Fuzzleman54321
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: Feb 2005
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Here is the next chapter, for my two fans, Slaveless and LoboDiabloLoneWolf!

Chapter 10 (extra long chapter i guess)

Two doors down, 5 to go. Number 3 now.

I walked in, and straight away there was darkness. I could not see anything and reached out my paw to feel things. The thing i felt made my heart skip 3 beats. I felt something musely, and strong. Oh no. A SCRAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"AHGHGHGHG!" I screamed as i ran. I ran into a wall. Dang. Trapped now. Unless....of course!!! Worth a try! I chanted, but couldent posses. Dan.... wait a min... the scrab is not moving. Its howling. I knew what i had to do. 3...2...1...now! I stopped chanting, which gave me enough time to slap to ghost trap, chant again, then run into the door. This is an Intreging Devloment.

Time for number 4. Through the door again, this time the room was so bright, i was nearly blinded. When i got my focus there were 4 scrabs. "Phew there gonna fight!" I thought. But they didnt fight. They came charging up to me, with Shread power. "WTF??? Ok just calm down...remember the advice abe gave you....." "If you are ever cornered by a pack of scrabs, stay still, they will think your dead, and scrabs only like enimies THEY kill."
I lay on the floor, absoulutly still. The scrabs came up to me, and sniffed me, grunted and walked off. Phew. I looked around and found a ghost trap. I slapped it, and went out the door.

Nearly there. Number 5. I walked in, and.....nothing. Absolutly nothing. The ghost trap just sat infront of me. I slapped it, and there was a howling sound. Crap. I ran to a door, which wasent open. Of course! It requiers 2. I found the other and slapped it, and the door opened. With a scrab inside. It gave chase. But i chanted. I ran past it and into the door.

Almost. Number 6. Straight away 7 scrabs gave chase. I ran completey ignoring the advice. I chanted, but it did'nt give any affect. IM IN TROUBLE. I ran and ran till my legs got tired. I lost the scrabs, but now im lost. Ohh the first ghost trap where are you. I ran again and skidded straight off a cliff. I fell down, but landed in a well, and stepped on a slurg. Hold on ...slurgs? FLEECHES! I felt a wet tounge on my back. There was a ghost trap. Quickly i slapped it, and went into the well, and shot back to the top of the cliff. Heh. Cant get me now. Hold on, sh*t. They used their tounges to get up. I quickly found the door, and went through.


Now time for the final. Number 7.


End of Chapter 10.


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