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02-09-2006, 06:17 PM
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Happy A deadly mistake.

Ello everyone! just felt like writing a short story , so here it is!

A deadly mistake

" Get up! " palooka shouted to the outlaws sleeping around the campsite. " Listen yer meat bags! , roomer iz dat da strangerz comin ta gett us , so we iz gunna ship out berfor sundown " . And so palooka rounded up his cronies and set out into the open praries of west oddworld.

Soon it was time to rest , so palloka and his fellow outlaws set up a temporary campsite , out in the open. " Okay , hers da speshul breefing " palooka said as his men huddled around the campfire to avoid the cold of the desert night. " Weez iz gunna walk froo dead steef canion , and den weez will settel in dis here junkyard " he said pointing a grubby , greasy finger at a tattered map.

Morning came , the boys had the regular meal of scrab cakes and baby chow soup , and then set off towards dead steef canyon . The blistering heat beat on the backs of packrat palookas men as they entered the canyon.
" okayz " palooka said " Keep a close eye out fer scrabs , there commun , i can smellit " . " But boss , were stuck in 'ere , if scrabs cum , were doomed " , a outlaw said.

Good last words for the man , as soon he was trampled by 3 scrabs fighting.
" Run fer da exit of tha canyen boyz! Its a scrab battle " Palooka shouted.
many tried running , or fighting , and were trampled by the ongoing battle for dominance the scrabs were having. " Yer zoggin idiots , RUN ! " palooka cursed as he loaded 3 slugs of buckshot into a scrabs face.

hopes of exiting the canyon were futile , as scrabs are very vicious , and will attack fleeing opponents. All the outlaws could do was wait for the battle to finish.

And soon it did . " How many ladz ave we gott left ? " palooka asked one of his " leutenents " . " Freeundred left boss " he replied and was instantley shot by palooka in a fit of rage . " Fine , noo plan , we exitt thiz canyen , and den we go too the junkyerd , and we wait fer the stranger ta cum , den we kill 'em , and take over buzzarten " palooka issued to the battered remains of his men.

And so they did , palooka was a very dangerous outlaw , but he and his boys would never be so mighty again.

The end.
Told ya it was short!
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Thanks for this oddish!

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