It's certainly got a dark twist to it at the moment; but it's very good. I'm liking the idea of a meeting between A Mudokan and a Steef; although wouldn't an average Steef be much bigger than a Mudokan? Then again maybe you've intentionally made this Steef small.
Also, I like the sound of this Runeblade sword; sounds like a pretty mean-ass weapon - no one would wanna pick on Jakob if they knew what was good for them!!
Keep up the good work; it's nice and neat too, nice use of italics and all that jazz. Very well presented is what I'm saying, as well as a good story
