Awwwwwwwww! How cute! Yeh, I like it! Keep it comin' matie!
Couple of critiques; start a new line everytime someone new talks. It gets confusing other wise. Try not to Capitalise Every Word, it's kinda off putting, other then that, watch yer spellin' an' grammer and it's fine! Apart from that, excellent.
Just a question, is the speaker male or female?