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01-28-2006, 02:00 PM
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Oddworld My Brand New Fan Fic: The Invasion

Hello! Welcome to my Brand New Fan Fic! The Invasion!

ENJOY:


Chapter 1



Bullets zoomed past me as i rolled behind a rock for safety. I could hear the bullets hitting the rock. Mudokons Were screaming in pain and agony. There invading......There invading........

"AGGGGGGGRHHHHH!!!!!!!" I Screamed as I shot up in bed! I Quickly hid under my sheet. Shivering, i looked out, to see nothing is actully there. I relaxed and got out from under the sheet, and got out of bed. I sleeply yawned and slowly walked to the bathroom. I came out with my face and ponytail wet. I grabbed a nearby towel and dryed myself. I looked in the mirror, to see tears in my eyes. My Brother, Geth had just Died Protecting Our Village From Scrabs. That day was his funerul. I looked down at the coffin, with Tears streaming down my face with Big Face Chanted: " Oh Great Odd! Take This Pure Innocent Mudokon Soul Into Your Kingdom! Let him Live in harmony and peace!" I took out a picture of us playing when we were young and placed it ontop of the coffin. At This Point, I fell down to my knees and sobbed and cried. He was my freind. My only freind. Noone likes me. There say im differnt because i help people to often. They say...... I should of never been born..........


As i slowly walked back to my hut, i had memeries of Geth and me. I remember us playing in a leaf pile...... "Hehe! Take this!" I said and threw a big pawful of leaves at Geth. "Your Going Down!" Geth replied Grinning and jumped ontop of me and we rolled in the leaf pile. But My happiness gone now... I dont think there is anything left for me..............

End Of Chapter 1

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