Havoc is giving you good info here, but you are misspelling many words wrong. For example:
"I luaghed and pulled out my trusty gun"
"scarb"
If you wanna avoid these spelling mistakes. Use microsoft word if you have it. Otherwise thestory is quite pwnage.
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I'm sure plenty of people will read them sooner or later.
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Thanks. Although I am moving into the comic business in these forums
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