well, I used to write stories, they weren't very successful, so I figugred i'd write some more, but each chapters shorter. please tell me your thoughts, and enjoy.

Sim: the liquid of life, shows us our death
we were walking through the dence jungle, our throughts were parched, I wondered why I was doing this, was I a traitor? we we helping the industrailists? was I helpinging the industrailists destroy our planet, when I could fight back? I didn't know, I didn't care. I just wanted a water.
then we saw it, the lake, teeming with all sorts of wildlife. then i heared gun fire....I was relieved to see it was just Ruzz, shooting at nearby zap flies for the sake of it, and then I saw the look of dissaproval of Sahe's face. maybe this was a mistake, I looked at Ruzz, and his brother Buzz (sligs are great at naiming aren't they?), the big bro, peering through the bushes.
we kept walking for a while, and then ran towards the waterwhole, with cries of joy. then it happened, at first I thought it was a mudokon tribe (Sahe obvously thought that too, by the happy look of his face), but I was wrong, we were wrong. I heared the screetches behind us, we turned around. I tried to scream, but my throaght was too dry. we were all parched, leaked of our energy, and seeing a heard of scrabs gave no joy to our eyes.
don't worry, i'll write the back story in the chapter after the next, I hope everyone likes it.
