Rather than making a thread to advertise a story, why not start a thread and just get on with it? It sounds very cool ,but seriously, add the COMING SOON thing and people start thinking its spam.
I am intrigued, but in the time the coming soon becomes came I'll probably have forgotten about this. Start with the story, not a trailer, and you're more likely to grab my attention and pull me back when you start the story.
Just a friendly tip
