[T-nex]

OOC: um Metroixer I'me very sorry to say this but your post was kind of impossible, and maybe you should change it a bit. How did Mist know about what was going on in Dek's lab as only they knew what was going on?? I mean there's no logical way to why and how Mist knows about it. You could have him randomly finding the door to the lab or something, which by the way you left out too. You have to describe how to get to places, since you can't just be in one end of the factory, and then pop up in the other end. It's impossible, because we do kind of follow a timeline.
You're OK, but maybe you should change your post just a little. I'll ignore your post for now, but don't take it as an offence...

IC:

Anni closed her eyes, and followed the others' conversation. She was happy that Boogie would saty, as she hated this Vykker and place more than ever. She didn't feel like sleeping or anything. But she felt lonely, so she let her mind being partly taken over by her friend.

"Oh Nova, why'd you change so much??" she asked in a low voice,almost whispering.

"Anni do you really want to be trapped here forever?" another voice answered.

it come out from Anni's mouth but it was a completely diferent voice, and much lower than Anni's.

"I know you started the fire... Why'd you get me into this mess?" Anni asked again.

"Because that both you and I can't live here. We were meant to be free, and use our blessing to help our race." Nova's voice said.

"Blessing??!! What the hell are you talking about?" Anni said too loud, as she felt an anger rise inside her.

"There's more to come than just fire... If you just let me take control just a little bit...." Nova's voice answered, but this time only in Anni head.

Anni felt Nova dissapear in the back of her mind, resting, being on standby untill she decided to strike again.

Anni's head began hurting a bit. She sighed, and opened her eyes a bit, looking at Boogie and Dek.