ooc: Metroixer, and dragonlord, both your characters need an entrance, they can't just appear in Repture Fams. The RPG has been going for a long time and it can't be said that they just happened to be there from the start and no one noticed them. Repture FArms was shut down at the start and reopened by arnie I belive, so they can't have just been there. Mist might have worked at the old Repture FArms then been moved when it shut down, and recently heard it had reopened in the news and and decided to come back over. It makes more sense.
Otherwise though, its a good start. Good bio, good character.
Jim sighed with relief when he heard the message. He'd escaped another day! He was about to run off, when he paused.
Jim; "Uh, Scruben, do you know where the mudokons bunks are? Cus I have no idea..."
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